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blnlchick
11-26-06, 12:32 PM
ok i started this on a board called until forever (i think someone had a post about that board) so i have 3 chapters tell me if u like it so far
chapter 1.
The day was May 9th, Nick and Vanessa's half birthday. When Vanessa woke up she notised her sidekick was 1 unread message. It was from Nick. It read, Hey 'nessa ive missed you. My promo tour for the new single is over!. Why dont we go for lunch and just spend the day together?? see you at 12:00 love, Nick. Since Vanessa was off of trl she said yeah and went to get ready. What she didnt know was Nick was planning something really special for her.
chapter 2
Its 10:00 and vanessa's getting ready. Her sidekick is going off with another message from nick. This one read. Hey 'nessa cant wait to see you. No need to get dressed up. Just meet me at times square at 12:00. Love,Nick. Vanessa wasnt going to get dressed up "Now why would Nick say that?" she thought "its just lunch, oh well." So she got ready and while she was in the limo she thought what were they gonna do? Go see a movie, ride allover the town? She couldnt wait!. When the limo driver oped the door she saw Nick.......
chapter 4
When Vanessa saw Nick her face lit up. She ran to shut the limo door. While she did that, Nick checked his back pocket. Making sure the ring was there. Vanessa ran to Nick. "Nick!" she said. "I've missed you so much!" "I know baby, I've missed you to." Nick said whlie hugging Vanessa. "So what are we gonna do today?" Vanessa said Nick said "First how about lunch,Im starving!,Is pizza ok?" "Its perfect" Vanessa exclamed. So at lunch Nick told his storys about his new single. "I think it might be better then the last!!" Then he asked "Hows TRL going?" Vanessa said" The funnyist thing happend,during a comerical break some guy in the audence asked if we were married yet!" Nick's heart jumped in nervousness about what she would say next. "So ..... What did you say??" She laughed and said "I said not yet hopefully soon but not yet!" That made Nick feel so much better. So after they ate Vanessa said shes be back because she had to use the bathroom. "Its perfect he said after she left, "she wont expect a thing until tonight". So after they got in the limo Nick said "Vanessa,I have to ask you something..............
is it ok???
Luv_98_Degrees
01-13-07, 06:50 PM
i love it so far keep up the good work Kim!
blnlchick
01-13-07, 06:55 PM
wow!! i guess i should post the rest of it!
Luv_98_Degrees
01-15-07, 02:47 PM
oh please do i really like this story so far!
blnlchick
02-09-07, 05:25 PM
hey i guess i should do something with this so here r next few chapters
chapter 4
"What???" Vanessa asked. "Do you wanna see a movie??" Nick wanted to know. "Yeah thats sounds fun!!" So they saw a movie and walked around times square. It was about 8:00 and v was tired. The limo driver missed the exit. "Nick?,Where are we going??" Vanessa was worried. "Dont worry!" He said with a flerty voice. "They arrived at a beach. One of Drews friends owned a private beach. "Nick!!!!!!!! Why did you take me here???" Vanessa asked. Nick said getting out"You'll see." So they sat down and Nick startd to talk "Nessa I love you. I know you think im not over Jess but I am. Ha She can cry all she wants now cuz i found my love!!!!" Vanessa blushed After a few minuts later Nick said nervously, "So Vanessa the one that I love,will you marry me?......."
chapter 5
Vanessa's jaw droped. The ring was soo beautiful, it might of been even more beautiful than Jessica's. Vanessa started to cry. "Oh my God Nick!!!,Yes I will marry you!!!" Nick started screaming "Whoo!!!!!" That made Vanessa laugh. "But..but when did you get that?" Vanessa asked Nick said "You know when I told you about my watch,well I did get the ring there." There was a picture on TMZ that Nick was looking for rings but he told Vanessa that it was his watch. "You piece of crap!!!" Vanessa laughed again. The sunset was the most beautiful thing. Then Nick turned around and kissed her. Then Vanessa wouldnl let go! After that they were laying on the beach. "Nick, I hope we stay together forever." Vanessa said "Don't worry I promice that wont happen plus we wont sign up for a relaty show" Nick and Vanessa laughed. "I cant wait to tell my Dad and step-mom!!" Vanessa exclamed. We'll tell everyone tomorrow" Nick said "Hopefully the tabloids wont find out untill next week." The tabloids were comming out tomorrow so they hopefully didnt have to worry. Or did they........
chapter 6
Vanessa woke up in all grins "I can't beleive im getting married to the man of my dreams" So she got out of bed, threw on her robe and went to the kitchen "Hey baby" Nick said. "Why did you turn off my alarm? I have to work on ET." Vanessa asked. "Oh yeah ET called they said take they day off." Nick told her "Did you tell them??" Vanessa said worried "No I promice"Nick smiled. Nick was doing some cd busness on his laptop. "Oh I have to call my Dad" Vanessa said walking to the phone. "Go ahead I called all my people." Nick told her. So Vanessa started diling. " Hey Dad!,Guess what? Nick proposed to me last night and I said yes!!" Her Dad said "Im so happy for you,do you need anything. "No I'm I mean we're ok,alright Dad bye!" "Hey Nick could you get the mail?" Vanessa asked "Well I guess" Nick faked a grown. So when he left for some reason she jumped on TMZ.com "Oh my God!!!!" She screamed 'Nick!!!!!!!!!" Good thing he was at the door. "Look they found out!,but how!!!" "Well what do you remember you looked around" Nick said. "Ok Vanessa told Nick "there was a bright flash then we went up here then you started taking of my shirt then" "Woah I know what I did there Nick explaned "Well they might think its not true the tabloids came out todayso we'll see next week." "Hey" Vanessa asked Are you sure you called everyone. "Oh s**t Nick said I forgot Jessica....
u still like it?
jessandnickfan
02-10-07, 10:26 PM
love it
please update more
blnlchick
03-21-07, 06:09 PM
hey...well i guess i should keep ya'll updated so...
chapter 7
Jessica just got finished with lunch with Ken as her cell phone rang. It was a ring she only have herd twice after the divorse. It was a voice saying I will always love her and There you Are playing after that. Jessica picked up the phone. "Hello?" " Hi Jessica" It was Nick."How have you been?" he askes."Well I'm fine I guess why are you calling?" Jessica wonders Nick almost didnt say anything at first then Vanessa sat on the couch with him and held his hand. "Jess the reason I'm calling is well.. last night I umm proposed to Vanessa and she said yes." Jess was silent for a minute "Go ahead and tell me what you want" Nick said She looked at Ken with a " he cant be mine anymore"face "Well Im happy for you two I hope you have a nice life together really" "Well Jess that means alot to us" Nick explanes. "Hey Nick can we still be friends?" Jess askes Nick says "Yeah we can and I hope you have a nice life with your new boyfriend you guyes look good together." "Thanks Nick I have to go now" Jess says "Alright bye." Vanessa askes "Is she ok with us?" Nick says "Yeah but shes kinda mad that we wont get together again but shes happy." When Jess hangs up she cryies a little then shes ok but will the tabloids have a party when they tell them the next day??......
chapter 8
Today was the day,well night. The day when Nick and Vanessa would tell Nick's publisis that they were engaged. So when everyone woke the next day, Monday, they would know. So Monday morning, when Vanessa went to TRL she was followd bythe paperazie. "Yeah were so happy,probally September 23 is what were thinking." she also said this. "No I'm not preganite we want a family but we'll wait a while." Nick got the same questions he said "Yes we are excited and no my new cd will not be another soluo." Also. "No shes not pregante were gonna wait." But Jess's answers were different. She told everyone "Oh I'm ok life goes on. and yes me and my new bf are doing awesome." But Jess told her friend Cacce(not her publist) that,a week from the wedding, she is gonna do something to Nick he wont forget.....
chapter 9
Well 4 months till the wedding and Vanessa was already feeling stressed. She complaned "Nick I didnt know wedding planning was so damn stressful." Nick laughed. "This time I'll do all that I can to make this perfect." Vanessa smiled "Aww Nick!" She leaned over and kissed him. They've only been engaged for 2 weeks and there already loving it. That was in New York, in LA,Jess was telling Ashlee what she was going to do. "Ok Jess,I don't like Nick and I've never been married but this seems way harsh." "Why are you gonna do this?" "Oh Ash you don't know how much Nick will love this." Ashlee looked at her strange. Cacee and Ashlee really didnt want thia to happen but they had no controll of it. But will Nick really like it?..
u still like it?
Yeah...please go on...too many frick'n commercials. LOL!
Yeah...please go on...too many frick'n commercials. LOL!
Agree!! Kim I love it, and can't wait for the surprise. I love to write also. This is very good. keep up the good work....you had me from the first line!:amazed:
Superstar
03-23-07, 11:57 AM
Keep up the good work, I can't wait for more!!!:)
blnlchick
07-27-07, 09:58 AM
sorry this is taking 4ever i 4got i was doing this LOL
chapter 10
Only 2 weeks until the wedding and they were excited. Nick was sitting on the couch and Vanessa was laying on there with her head on Nick's lap. "Hey Nick me,Susie and Lala are going out next week is that ok?" Nick said "No 'Nessa,what do you think I'm gonna say?" "Vanessa was embarsed. So a week later Vanessa said "Ok Nick I'll be back around 12:30 a.m see ya." Nick stayed home. You might think why? its a Friday. Well Nick was working on a song for the wedding on the next Friday. It was around 12:00a.m and Nick was watching t.v. "Theres nothing on the damn tv at midnight. Then there was a knock at the door. He opened it. A fermillar voice said " Hi Nick........
chapter 11
"Jessica,what are you doing here?" Nick asked. "I can't visit my friend?" Jess said "Well I guess." Nick said. So Nick went back to watching tv. "Hey Nick I have to talk to you." Jess told Nick. Lets go in here." It was Nick and Vanessa's room. Nick is curous. Jess starts saying. "You know you havent seen me for awhile so heres a gift." Jess started making out with Nick. Nick tryes to stop her but doesnt help. Jess takes off her shirt. So when Jess started kissing his neck, Nick was ferrous. "Jess stop!!!!!!!!!!" "What are you doing???" "I'm making you happy!" Jess said. "Get the hell off me." Nick screamed. Vanessa walked in the living room. She walked on there so quiet that if you sat there you wouldnt hear her. She herd Nick say."Listen Jess I dont know about you but I'm happy now.I got the best girlfriend/future wife a guy can ask for. I wanted you back and I lost out,now you're losing out Now Jessica **** off!!!!!" Jessica screamed in maddness got her shirt back on and walked out. She saw Vanessa and said "*****." Vanessa said "Sluty hoe." Vanessa ran to Nick. "You really think I'm the best??" Nick said Of corse why would I want to marry you??" Nick and Vanessa kissed but Vanessa thought will married life be as great as this??
so......do u want me 2 continue or not
Superstar
07-27-07, 10:25 AM
Yeah, I think you should continue!:)
blnlchick
10-21-07, 06:28 PM
hey.... i was juss wondering want me 2 continue? high schools got me sooo buzy so let me kno b/c i want 2 tell u more but it depends on wut u like :D
OhioluvsNick
10-21-07, 06:36 PM
add more to the story:)
blnlchick
10-21-07, 07:01 PM
okay i will but i have 2 tell u the next 2 chapters r probally the most boring chapters out of the whole story...welll at lest i thought.... leave ur comments and mabye i will post more and it could b tonight!!!
chapter 12
Well today was the day everyone was waiting for. Vanessa was so excited/nervous. "Oh my God mom I'm so nervous,do I look ok?" She asked. "You look fine" Her mom said "You'll be fine!" In the other room was Nick and Drew "Woah she really did that?" Drew asked Nick. "Yeah but I told her to stay away." So it was time. The bridsmades and best men started walking down the ile. Then everyone stood up. Vanessa started walking down the ile. Nick's jaw would of droped if no one was there,so his eyes grew really big. Vanessa's dad stoped, hugged her and wisperd to Nick. "Please take care of her." "Don't worry Sir I will and thanks for your blessing." So the wedding started and it was beautiful. So after all the I do's and vows, the priest said. "I now anounce you husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride." Nick fliped up Vanessa's vail....
chapter 13
Vanessa smiled back at Nick. Then they kissed. Everyone started cheering. When they walked back to the limo,someone took a picture. That was the picture all the world would see. When they got to the hall,everyone was staring at them. "Nick" Vanessa asked "Why is everyone staring at us?" Nick smiled and said "Because they know that I'm the most beautiful girl." Vanessa blushed a lil. So they sat down at the big table where all the people who was in the wedding sit. About 2 hours later,it was time for there first dance. Now Vanessa thought they were doing it to I do(cherish you) but she was wrong. When she first herd the music she wispered to Nick "Hey whats this?" Nick said " Oh yeah I should of told you but I wrote and recored a song for us." Vanessa almost statred crying. I guess shes not use to a super romantic like Nick. About 11:30 they secretly slipped out and hoped into the limo. They changes and was on there way to the airport....
so.... =D
OhioluvsNick
10-21-07, 07:20 PM
good story
blnlchick
11-01-07, 04:48 PM
okay well heres more since ya wanted it
chapter 14
They were going to Hawaii. The flight thats usally long wasnt to them. When they got to there room,Vanessa ran to there little balconly. "Nick its so beautiful here!". When she turned around,Nick was right behind her to kiss her. A minute later Vanessa asked "Nick,why did you do that?" Nick said "Because I cant wait to spend my life with you." Vanessa smiled and walked to the bathroom to get ready for dinner. About 15 minuts later she asked Nick "Do I look ok?" She was wearing a black tank,white mini and black heals. "Baby you look beautiful no matter what." Nick said. So they went to dinner and had a great time. On there way back Vanessa asked "So,now what?" Nick grins and carries her back to the room. When they got there Nick laid her on the bed and started undoing her shirt...
chapter 15
When Vanessa woke up she herd a voice that said. "'Nessa wake up. She groaned. "What do you want Nick,I'm trying to sleep." Nick said excittly "Come on 'nessa you'll love it!!!" "Fine" Vanessa said. So Nick took her to the beach. "Ta-da!" Nick said. It was a breakfast on the beach. "Nick!!! this is soo sweet are you just pretending or are you always like this?" Vanessa exclamed. Nick said. Since you're with me now you'll get this kinda treat alot." Vanessa thought "Oh my, a guy thats treats me like I'm his everything!!,Derek never did anything like this." So on there honeymoon they had a great time. The night before they left, when there were almost asleep, Vanessa asked. "Ok were you this nice to Jess or am I your life now?" Nick said "Listen,yeah I did some of this super romantic stuff but Jess only liked it a little bit, you, well your everything I could ask for." "Your beautiful,smart,you like sports well,I wouldnt change anything for you." Vanessa smiled and said. "Are you sure you wouldnt change me for the world?" Nick said. Thats right!" Nick and Vanessa kissed. Little did Vanessa know was that Nick had one more suprise for her....
so.......=D
nick2fanatic
11-04-07, 03:08 PM
keep typing the story it is really good.
blnlchick
12-14-07, 09:22 PM
chapter 16
They were in LA when Nick took her in his car. "Nick where are we going?" Vanessa asked worriedly. Nick said "Well 'Nessa while we were in Hawaii, Drew,Justn and Jeff well,they set up our new house so we don't have to move in ourselvs." Vanessa's spechless. "Oh my God Nick!! the house it's all ours now!!!" "Why didnt you tell me you.." Nick laughed "Hello what does the word suprise mean??" They walked all over the house everything was placed the way they wanted it to. Vanessa said "Nick I just can't get over that this is ours now." "So many memories can and will happen." Nick said "'Nessa I know me and Jess didn't work but I promice that everything will work. They started kissing passonly and layed on the couch. What was gonna happen now was goning to change them forever........
chapter 17
It was a year and a half later. They were still married and were having the best life. A few weeks ago Nick came back from his tour. You can guess what they did when he got back. But 2 weeks after that,Vanessa didnt feel well. Vanessa called her doctor but she said to take flu medisin. But it didnt work. "Nick" Vanessa said worriedly. "I dont think I have the flu." Nick said "Well what do you think whats wrong with you." Vanessa said I'll let you know in 10 minutes. Nick knew what she ment. While she was waiting Vanessa stayed in the bathroom worried and Nick was in there room wondering what would happen. After 10 minuts was up she rhurried to look at the test. It was true. Vanessa started in crying in happyness. A minute later Vanessa tells Nick "Nick, Im pregentate." Nick smiles.....
chapter 18
"Are you serious?" Nick said excitly. Vanessa's voice shook a little "Just look at this?" Nick took a look at it and then smiled. "Oh my God baby this is the best news!!" Vanessa said "Do you think we're ready I mean we've waited almost 2 years.?" "Of corse!" Nick said hugging her "I mean we have experence,ok I dont know if taking care of Isabella for a few days counts but I think you are going to be the best mom ever!" Vanesa started crying "I just can't believe it our dream is comming true!" Nick sat down and said "You know I waited for this a long time." "I thought me and Jessica were gonna settle down and have a family but its like she didnt want to." Vanessa smiled and said I cant wait. But will it be as easy as she thought?.........
okay well thats it i never fisnished but do u want me2 ppl on the other site didnt care but do u????
Nicks_lil_baby08
04-11-08, 09:08 PM
I love it ! MORE!:):D
blnlchick
04-26-08, 08:57 PM
Wow! I didnt see the post till last Saturday! Well I finished it, last Saturday! I will give a chapter at a time..okay with u??
Two months later, Nick woke up to a horiable sound. It was Vanessa on the bathroom floor, crying. "Are you okay?" he asked. "No! I just want this to be over with already! I dont want to be leaing over the toliet every morning!!!!!" Nick tried to make her smile. "Well, just think about it, in 6 months, this will be over!" He gave a goofy grin. It didnt work. "But I want it to be over now!!", she puts her hands to her face. Nick got down on the floor with Vanessa and took her in his arms. "Baby listen, I know this will be over with soon. And when that happens, you will be the best mom in the world." She picked up her head and placed it on his solder. "Ypu dont know how much that ment to me." Nick said "Yeah I do."
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Nicks_lil_baby08
05-04-08, 10:51 PM
Love It ! More :d
Lindsey Lou
06-08-08, 04:42 PM
I love it!! More please!!
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